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Ai Crying - 1

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I tried to make Ai look very emotional, but it still seems off. I know her right arm looks messed up (it was putting up a fight with me), but it's the face I'm worried about....hmm...

Also, I tried messing with the dialogue box, but it still looks rather generic. I might need to do a complete overhaul. Also, I tried to put in a continue indicator (my current obsession with Ren'Py), which is blinking eyes. However, it goes so fast that I'm afraid it might give someone a seizure. And perhaps I need to stop putting a continue indicator in all of my visual novels...

Character created in 3D Custom Girl. Background courtesy of mao space. Information on Ren'Py can be found here: [link]
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What if you make the text a bit bigger? As for her face, try moving the top eyelids down instead of the bottom ones up.